Final Essay Proposal

I will be writing about the college ministry retreat I went on this past weekend to Des Moines Iowa. It will be about all of the unplanned moments and all the travel and exploring fun of being on a trip. My characters will include the girls in my connection group. The theme will be that it's the unexpected moments that end up meaning the most.

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