"Dolores de Pocha" Response

Question- I thought your use of Spanish in this piece was very effective in the development of your style and voice. How did you go about/what method did you use to decide when to use Spanish and when to use English?

Comment- I liked how you were about to drive the plot of your story with separate scenes and instances that all connected and felt like individual parts of a complex whole.

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